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The Thompsons were your average family. They lived in a “normal” neighborhood in a “normal” house. They had a “normal” twenty-two year old daughter who was married to a “normal” twenty-five year old. They had a “normal” granddaughter
i dnt rly like the " in frount and behind the words normal in the begining they get annoying after a while but other than that it sounds great